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"Away" 2003-04-28 - 5:25 a.m. older - previous - next - profile - host - my band - my lj remember how I've been bitching about having writer's block? well no longer! as I was lying in bed an idea came to me, and it was so strong that I had to just jump up and take advantage of it I didn't use the guitar melody I'd wanted to use, but instead wrote a whole new one a quick, angry tune in drop D I actually thought up the title a while ago, but didn't really plan on using it until I noticed that I put the word in the song that's kinda lame, but whatever anyway, the rythm is kinda awkward with the verses being long and the chorus being short and choppy, and you really need to hear me sing it to fully grasp how it all comes together but hopefully it won't look too shitty just in type I might tweak the guitar or verses a little, but I like the chorus anyway; here's my latest song, and you can go back one entry for an account of my boring day: it's so hard to make myself try anymore I gave you the key to my soul but you never touched the door I wish that you would give it one more try but with the sweetest voice you spoon-fed me lies so now I'll be the Unforgiven* to you for me a- way I'm driven you lied to me with all your breathing and now I'll leave no tears or blinking and up above the moon is crying for blood and down below the sand has all turned to mud I scream at the wind to carry to you only the clouds above can see if it's true so now I'll be the Unforgiven to you for me a- way I'm driven you lied to me with all your breathing and now I'll leave no tears or blinking in the sweetest voice you spoon-fed me lies in the sweetest voice you spoon-fed me lies -Away Me *-(because of Metallica that word must now always be capitalized) � � |